Kia ora Niamh! This is Lila (your friend)! I really liked your story it had so much WOW to it if you know what I mean! Just one little thing I am mad beacuse you copyed my storyboard because I had brass lion in it to and I just...! But on a good note I would give it a 9/10 because you did you copy my storyboard! blog you later, Lila🐹
Thanks Lila! Sorry I copied, actually I did not copy because I just thought of something and did it. Why did you not finish your sentence? You were just like: and and I just...! Why???????? What was your favourite part? Also it is not a storyboard, it is a book creator.
Talofa,I’m Felix Room 8. I enjoyed the part when he proposed. Did you think about the other animals? Maybe you could make a story including every animal the Bradley owns. Next time, you could add in more speech bubbles. Blog You Later bye.
Kia ora Niamh! This is Lila (your friend)! I really liked your story it had so much WOW to it if you know what I mean! Just one little thing I am mad beacuse you copyed my storyboard because I had brass lion in it to and I just...! But on a good note I would give it a 9/10 because you did you copy my storyboard!
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Lila🐹
Thanks Lila! Sorry I copied, actually I did not copy because I just thought of something and did it. Why did you not finish your sentence? You were just like: and and I just...! Why????????
DeleteWhat was your favourite part? Also it is not a storyboard, it is a book creator.
blog ya later!
Niamh🐁
Talofa,I’m Felix Room 8. I enjoyed the part when he proposed. Did you think about the other animals? Maybe you could make a story including every animal the Bradley owns. Next time, you could add in more speech bubbles. Blog You Later bye.
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